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I fade away with utmost ease.
I fail to speak,
I fail to please.
If only anyone really sees,
That I am not so weak.
And try to talk to tell you so,
But everyone leaves,
Wherever I go.
They can’t see this pain,
This pain that I show,
And these pleadings that I shriek.
And underneath this hardened shell,
Lay fire and brimstone
That spews out from hell.
They can’t see how much I actually fell,
And that I am now unknown.
From fire I come,
To tell you misfortune.
That haunts you until day,
Brings forth the sun.
For I was not needed.
Not need by one.
They can’t see how much I’ve grown…
©2008-2009 ~Stratolight
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Aaaw. Poor Silence. DD: I made this at school while trying to draw Silence's true form which lay hidden underneath those continuous shields of armor. But, I fail at drawing her concealed self.

Eh well. I'll draw 'er right, someday. o_e'
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That's really good, I loved reading that :D

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:rose: :rose: Just because a sleepless night can be plagued by nightmares :blackrose: :blackrose: It doesn't mean that the daylight hours are any better...
:heart: o :heart: *tear falls from eye* That was beautiful That touched me... I haven't read a good poem to relate to in a looooong long while. ^.^ Thank you so much for that! XD It was awesome. And don't worry, you'l get the drawing right someday. ^.^

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